Final Video Class Feedback

Improvements:
We had a class viewing and anyone other than our own group stated some positive and negative things about our video, here are some of the statements quoted. Improvements: a different location instead of the office, the office doesn't seem very real and house-like. Blood at the scene of the murder would of been a lot more realistic and added some dramatic effect to the ending. Also Eds acting is possibly too comical and doesn't give the killing scene much sense of authentic urgency. Too conclude; the music is too loud when it starts, punching in, blending in and out.

Positive:
Point of view shot with the camera moving works really well when the gun is fired, it gives a 1st person view on the murderers activity. The two scene locations at City House entrance to the train station worked very well, they showed the characters movement and genuine escape from the city. the characters haircut really brings out effective use of character building details, as well as the wash of the face and change of clothes - it shows the viewer what exactly is going on and gives off clear proof of the fact the film is ending. The props are ideal for the film and keep sort of clears the murderers name, giving you a sense of sympathy for him, even without reading the prop file the viewers could understand what was going on.